julia002

Thank you for the comment! This was super helpful!!

you got it, i loved your review! thank you for reading my work

I really like the "alright let's head back inside." That touched me as we can feel such profound experiences, feeling that fire and watching the flag burn, then it's just ...

thank you for this review, I love that you said you were surprised!

woww thank you for this review/response!

thank you so much for the review!

thank you so much for the review! "strange but very interesting" is very flattering thanks;)

Omg. This is the kindest review, I'm flattered. Thank you! :)

I tried to make this story pretty vague to let it free for different interpretations. Thank you for the suggestions and review!

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I love the setting of being in a ballroom! I think the busyness and vastness of it always sets a good tone for a story. This writing felt very theatrical ...

In my writing, I like to value the characters and their emotions, so this means a lot! Thank you!

I always enjoy constructive criticism, thank you for the analysis/review!

Ohh I'm very intrigued by this! I love the classic trope of a small town with big secrets. I can feel a whole world of characters being created here in ...