jster02

Thanks for the review! I wasn't expecting to get any more on this story, so it was a fun surprise to log on and see this.

Ah, that makes more sense :)

I'm planning on writing more stories set in this universe and I wanted to save Jacks backstory for later. But this review reminded me that I've gotta do some work ...

Oh wow, I completely forgot to check my grammar. Thanks for reminding me! I'll have to fix all this once I get the chance.

Thanks for pointing that out. I'll go change that right now... :)

Ah, that makes a lot more sense now. Sorry I didn%u2019t pick up on that.

Of course! :)

Yea, I don%u2019t really enjoy proofreading either. I bet we%u2019re not the only ones either...

You%u2019re welcome:)

Yea, I see what you%u2019re saying. Maybe put in a line of dialogue mentioning it towards the beginning? That%u2019s all I can think of anyways. Of course, it%u2019s up to ...

Oooohhhh. That explains so much. And I suppose you%u2019re right about the battle. (Or lack of one)

True. Funny how the same words can mean so many different things at once...

Thanks for the suggestions! I probably should explain the food thing shouldn't I? Thought about it while writing it out, but sorta forgot to implement it.

Thanks so much for the review! I'll definitely try to make it feel less flat. I was sort of aware of that as I was writing it, but wasn't exactly ...

Anytime. :D