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Re: Ad Infinitum (first 5.8k words, tentative title)
I will be back for you.
Oct 19, 2011 -
Re: Not just Child's Play
I'm coming, trust me. I haven't forgotten to get to review this, just a little busy. Back soon.
Oct 16, 2011 -
Re: Wake up Buttercup
I will be back for this after work ;)
Sep 30, 2011 -
Re: The Space Between Infinity- 1
Okay, here I am as requested. And I'm not sure why, I mean you have had some damn good reviewers here, and I haven't read them all so I may ...
Sep 27, 2011 -
Re: Stop and Stare (Novel Soundtrack)
Band of Horses, best track by far.
Sep 25, 2011 -
Re: How Long Can YOU Cheat Death w/ Thirteen Days Till Midnight
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Sep 25, 2011 -
Re: (My Missing) Picture Frame
lovely.
Sep 22, 2011 -
Re: The Ocean Breathes Salty
The ocean breaths salty, won't you carry it in? Modest Mouse fan I see? I prefer the original.
Sep 17, 2011 -
Re: My Perfect Girl
eww, gross, a love poem.
Sep 16, 2011 -
Re: The Bus Stop
'Cute.'
Sep 15, 2011 -
Re: Fog - Part 1/10
Thanks for the reviews. Just a quick note. This isn't segmented as a story. That is to say if I encountered this anywhere else I personally would read it all ...
Sep 11, 2011 -
Re: Poems are for all of us.
One comment. I would say poetry is more popular here than any other form of writing. I often gripe about the lack of decent fiction. And here I am still ...
Sep 6, 2011 -
Re: The Making
Thanks Heather as always! and Lava. And Confetti, once again thank you for picking out all those little errors I seem to miss. I admit the ending was rushed. I ...
Sep 4, 2011 -
Re: The Gift of Christmas
This is amazing, must run however. Back later to review. P.S- this is for the exclusive - let's leave out JP - mod contest is it?
Aug 30, 2011 -
Re: Deleted
Wow - You have done so well with the ending. Much better. Two things I noticed, occasionally you use the same adjective in succession that is to say, you repeat ...
Aug 30, 2011