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jmiller714

  • Poetry » General, General Re: Where Elephants Go to Die

    i really liked it. the imagry was great and the imagination was fantastic. it could have been put together a little better but it really is a great peice. i ...

    Aug 7, 2012
  • Poetry » General, General Re: mo(u)rning

    well umm....... i dont really know what to think of this one. its interesting to say the least, and it held my attention well enough but there is nothing here ...

    Aug 7, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: I Can't Think of a Title Yet...

    oh my goodness i want to read more. that was great i would love for that to continue into a book. my only question is how did all of this ...

    Aug 7, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: I Can't Think of a Title Yet...

    oh my goodness i want to read more. that was great i would love for that to continue into a book. my only question is how did all of this ...

    Aug 7, 2012
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Half Asleep

    this one made me want to cry a little. im a hge animal lover and i have a gray wolf at home he is like family to me. i can ...

    Aug 7, 2012
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Turning My Back

    i really do like this one its really creative. i think its a little on the dark side but thats good every now and then. Alone with my thoughts I ...

    Aug 7, 2012
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Horror Re: Dance with Death

    as i was reading this i felt chills going up and down my spine. you did a great job getting the words out well enough. but it could have been ...

    Aug 6, 2012
  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: My cat's brains

    ok well this one is a little bit out there. im not saying that its bad its just a little bit demented. i like the choice of words but it ...

    Aug 6, 2012
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Lipstick Stains

    im love the creativeness of this i know the inspiration for this poem had to be painfull but this was very well writen and put together. i couldnt find much ...

    Aug 2, 2012
  • Short Story » Narrative, Dramatic Re: Broken Bottles

    i like the thought of it and the lesson behind it but some of the gramar was a little off

    Aug 2, 2012


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