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Re: Where Elephants Go to Die
i really liked it. the imagry was great and the imagination was fantastic. it could have been put together a little better but it really is a great peice. i ...
Aug 7, 2012 -
Re: mo(u)rning
well umm....... i dont really know what to think of this one. its interesting to say the least, and it held my attention well enough but there is nothing here ...
Aug 7, 2012 -
Re: I Can't Think of a Title Yet...
oh my goodness i want to read more. that was great i would love for that to continue into a book. my only question is how did all of this ...
Aug 7, 2012 -
Re: I Can't Think of a Title Yet...
oh my goodness i want to read more. that was great i would love for that to continue into a book. my only question is how did all of this ...
Aug 7, 2012 -
Re: Half Asleep
this one made me want to cry a little. im a hge animal lover and i have a gray wolf at home he is like family to me. i can ...
Aug 7, 2012 -
Re: Turning My Back
i really do like this one its really creative. i think its a little on the dark side but thats good every now and then. Alone with my thoughts I ...
Aug 7, 2012 -
Re: Dance with Death
as i was reading this i felt chills going up and down my spine. you did a great job getting the words out well enough. but it could have been ...
Aug 6, 2012 -
Re: My cat's brains
ok well this one is a little bit out there. im not saying that its bad its just a little bit demented. i like the choice of words but it ...
Aug 6, 2012 -
Re: Lipstick Stains
im love the creativeness of this i know the inspiration for this poem had to be painfull but this was very well writen and put together. i couldnt find much ...
Aug 2, 2012 -
Re: Broken Bottles
i like the thought of it and the lesson behind it but some of the gramar was a little off
Aug 2, 2012
