jessiethought

Oh, okay! I didn't really see the meter in the poem, so sorry! I would have reviewed differently if I had!

Thanks for the review!

Sure!

Thanks so much for your kind words! :)

It is serious. The idea to write this was taken from a trip my Dad took to Uganda--the (African) Minister of Health really did advise the people to use latrines ...

Thank you so much, skorlir! Your words mean a lot to me.

You are mighty welcome!

Thank your for reviewing. I'll see what I can do about showing why she read it.

Thank you so much for reviewing!

P.S. I do like your addition of the extra stanza. (I hope what's going on in real life works out for you.)

Yep. I know what you mean about creating a more defined form of yourself. Right now I have two stories creating themselves in my head--two separate stories, about two different ...

Thank you for taking the time to read my poem!

Whew! That is... just... awesome! I really am speechless! And that's saying a lot--'cause if anyone reads my reviews, they'd know I always have a lot to say! (I'm--ahem--a little ...

Sheesh this is a long review! I guess I really liked your story, then, to write so much!

Sure, call on me anytime to review something. (And if I have time it should get done. "If I have time" is the key... with school and all.) And thanks ...