jessiethought

Sure, it's okay if you do that, as long as you write down that I wrote it! (Don't feel awkward. And what you had is fine.) :)

Thank you for reading! All of your thoughts are appreciated--I can't make it better if I don't know how it seems to other people reading it.

Thank you for reading my poem! Yay! The ending feels the way I meant it to--hence the sudden break in my pattern of stanza length--uneasy is a good word for ...

Thank you for reading it! :)

I will definitely pray for your mother and you and your family.

Thank you! I guess I'm making the title "Schizophrenic," then, since you guys like that.

Thank you for reading my poem and thanks for your suggestions!:D

Thanks :)

Sure, you are absolutely welcome! :) I know, I like YWS for that reason, too. (And other reasons.) I'm so glad to have good critiques on my work. My family ...

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Yep! Sure! I finally had some time this weekend to get to it. :)

Ah. It's SUPPOSED to be up in the air. ;)

Thank you for reading it!

Thanks so much for the review!

Thanks for the review!