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jessie2009

  • Lyrics » General, General Re: I'd Cry (An "I'd Lie" by Taylor Swift Parody) *contest entry

    When I read the title I thought it was going to be about an ex-boyfriend, but instead it was about friends! It makes me think it was like saying bye ...

    Jul 24, 2010
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: The Best Book Ever Read

    A really good series is Stephanie Plum! It's be Janet Evanoich. I think there is seventeen books. There about a bounty hunter names Stephanie Plum! I think I've read, like, ...

    May 29, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: love

    Is this suppose to be a short story? Or is it suppose to be a prologue and you can say like five years later and maybe they met again, but ...

    Dec 26, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Forever part 2

    Hi! How are you? Thamks for emailing me about the story!! I see everyone in dark shade of colors; blue, black, purple, brown. Alright, this sentence put me off. I ...

    Dec 24, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: How to Live - Chapter Four

    I've been reading your story since chapter one. But I never got to do a review because I was on my phone. Really I don't have anything to tell you ...

    Dec 21, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Forever

    I was just wondering if this is a short story or if you are going to continue it on? It would be a good long story. What I didn't understand ...

    Dec 19, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: DELETED

    Hi! How are you? I loved this story! Your title interested me, so I decided I would read it. I don't think I've ever read a story of yours. For ...

    Dec 19, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Whenever Forever Will Be - Chapter One (Part 1)

    Hi AmberJane. I really like your piece here. I hope you continue writing. I will look forward into reading your next chapter. I was getting confused though. Is the main ...

    Nov 25, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Mrs Jones - Chapter 10

    Wow. That was good. I like the other chapters a lot better though... This one seemed boring, kinda. But I still like it. I was WAY wrong about E and ...

    Nov 18, 2009
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: summer romance

    Summer Romance! I am just going to show you some mistakes. Then I will tell you what I think=] Every girl dreams about having a summer romance once in their ...

    Oct 12, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: All Babies Are Blessings (16)

    That was nice. There's one thing that confused me though. In Chapter 15 (I think, not quite sure) it said she was 6 months pregnant. But in this chapter it ...

    Sep 28, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: White Minds (R)

    I like it. It's like really cool. You don't normally see things like this. I think you should keep it but add more description. Like explain a little in the ...

    Sep 27, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Child's play part 2

    Wow! The part about her cuts gave me chills. You're details were good. A lot better than mine=]. Well I see you have posted Chapter 2.5 so I am going ...

    Sep 25, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: perspective of an entertainer-PG13 (edited version)

    I like it. The characters are nice. I liked how you waited to describe Jenny. Abigail is quite interesting, too. I get the feeling she's been in this and is ...

    Sep 23, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: House Warming

    I need this reviewed because it is a contest entry at my school and I dont trust my teacher :D Anne lifted the last box marked dishes/(no space) utensils out ...

    Sep 12, 2009


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