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Re: Two Hearts Apart (part 1)
haha. review the other parts
Jun 13, 2011 -
Re: What Happened?
perfect description of my room LOL .. hehehe i know there's something more in this poem and i want to figure it out.
Jun 9, 2011 -
Re: A Letter to a Valentine
i like how you end it Well, except the part where I told you that I Loved you. That part, I actually did Mean.
Jun 9, 2011 -
Re: Confusion
Emptiness is inside, blankness is outside. My heart is in my head, my head is in my heart. i love you're whole poem! but the first four lines were my ...
Jun 9, 2011 -
Re: Love shouldn't hurt
"simplicity is the best asset of beauty" as what my favorite teacher says.. and this story was the best example of it nice
Jun 9, 2011 -
Re: I Need Someone
i agree on their comments your song was full of emotions..' nice!
Jun 9, 2011 -
Re: Remembering
awww!! the poem makes me sad and that means.. your work was with emotions keep it up!
Jun 7, 2011 -
Re: Bleu Celeste - Part 1
nice! the part one was so good hmm.. your really for fantasy stories because the descriptions was fantastic!
Jun 7, 2011 -
Re: Goodbye, Love
i like it so much! the emotions was so clear! keep it up!
Jun 6, 2011 -
Re: two hearts apart -part 1 (revised)
thank you for the review!!
Jun 6, 2011 -
Re: The F.U.N. Song.
smile yep! i can't help but smile when i read your song haha. and frankly now i have my LSS LAST SONG SYNDROME because of your cute FUN song =)
Jun 6, 2011 -
Re: The F.U.N. Song.
smile yep! i can't help but smile when i read your song haha. and frankly now i have my LSS LAST SONG SYNDROME because of your cute FUN song =)
Jun 6, 2011 -
Re: with out you
thank you so much haha.. it comes from my heart (chuckles)
Jun 3, 2011 -
Re: Why?
I don't know why but i felt so odd when the song you've just wrote keeps me wondering why? ______________________ haha! i made my own lyrics about the song hmm.. ...
Jun 2, 2011 -
Re: two hearts apart (scene)
ha ha. actually this scene will be on the part 4 of my novel. that's why i wrote it in separately.
Jun 1, 2011