Published June 2, 2011
actually this is my first song. i wrote it for my boyfriend (chuckles). and when he heard it (on the day of our monthsary) i was so shocked he cried. hope you like it! 
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Wow Jen, composer? haha... Super sweet song! I want to hear it ok?
And by the way, who will not cry if he received a song composed by the one he love right?
You're so sweet
I agree with Bronk
Just work on Capitalization ok??
thank you so much
haha.. it comes from my heart (chuckles)
Wow. That is very beautifully written. The wording is amazing and it flows very well. I found it wonderful and can't find anything about it that needs to be improved. They are quite excellent lyrics.