jemjive

Hey Thana! This song I guess you would call it seems more like poem. A song has verses and a chorus and often a bridge. As a poem though this ...

Poetry may not be your forte, but this one is great. I don't really understand what it's about but I like it hahah. It gives just the right amount of ...

Woooooow, this poem is fantastic! I don't really have anything to critique! I can just gush about what I loved. Hahaha. I agree with eab10 when she said that she ...

First off, I think this piece has real potential. I think it is awesome now but could be even better with a little bit of work. First there are just ...

Hi, I am jemjive and I will be your reviewer today. I think these lyrics are pretty good however there are some spots that I think could be slightly changed. ...

I can't believe how exactly this fits to my life right now! Dead serious, sounds just like what I just went through a mere two weeks ago! It's a rough ...

Hi, I'm jemjive and will be your reveiwer. I will say that I throughly enjoyed reading this poem. It flows very nicely other than maybe the first verse, it sounds ...

Hi I'm jemjive and I suppose I will be your reviewer haha. This poem fits the category perfectly, dramatic. It is deep and has feeling. It is not just a ...

I'm jemjive and I guess I am your first reviewer... I really liked this poem, suicide is a subject that is so touchy that I think it takes a lot ...

Hi, I`m jemjive I will be reviewing your poem. I suppose your word choice is pretty good, but your poem has no organization. There are two lines that rhyme and ...

This is great!! I found myself singing (badly :lol: ) in my head instead of just reading it which is a good thing you want lyrics to be like that ...

This is beautiful. I too have had that thought that Cinderella's deeds were of the evil sort. If you have ever read the original Cinderella not the Disney one, you ...