jamgalloway

Hello, there! I see this is your first post here, so welcome! If you need help, just want someone to talk to, ever want to collaborate on something, would like ...

Hey, there, I'm just gonna leave a pretty short review here since I see that someone else already went pretty in-depth with theirs. A few things: First, there's quite a ...

I really liked this. I've always thought short stories were pretty cool, and I've written some that are even shorter than this before, too, so I definitely don't think it's ...

Hey, there! My review is going to based purely off of what I read here, since I haven't read the first chapter, or episode. First off, the overall writing of ...

Hey there! I haven't read any of this story before so I'm basing my review purely off of what was in this chapter. First of all, your descriptions are excellent. ...

Hey! I know you said you probably won't do any editing on your story or anything, so I'm not going to make this long. Just trying to help get some ...

Hello there! I see you're new, so welcome! If you need any help, just want to talk, whatever, just let me know. :) And don't worry so much! Even *if* ...

Hello, there! This has been around for a bit so I thought I'd review it. I haven't read any other chapters of the story though, so my thoughts on this ...

Hey, there! I haven't reviewed any of these in awhile so when I saw it in the green room I figured I'd do it. This was good! I think it ...

Alright, it took me awhile, but I've finally finished reading it. And honestly, this as pretty good! There were flaws, yes, but overall you had great pacing, pretty good descriptions, ...

Hey, there! I finally made it for a review. This is probably gonna be pretty short though cause, like I said, I don't know all that much about poetry. Any ...

Hello! I see you're new here, so welcome! If you have any questions or just want to talk or whatever just let me know. :) I have to agree with ...

First of all, I see you're new here so welcome! If you have any questions or just want to talk or whatever, just let me know. :) Alright! Now for ...

Hello, there! This is my first time reading any of this story(so I didn't read the prologue), so I'm basing everything I say off of this chapter. And a heads ...

Hey, there! This is written pretty well, but I do have to say that it's pretty cliche. Honestly, just the first paragraph turns me off of it because of how ...