jamgalloway

Hello, there! I haven't read any other chapters of this story but decided to review this one since it's been in the green room for awhile, so excuse me if ...

Hello! If I'm being honest, I don't have much to say for this review since this is written so well, but I'm going to do it anyway since it's been ...

Hey, there! Just popping in for a short review. To start off, we didn't need the backstory up top. Most of that was stuff we could infer, or maybe find ...

Hello, there! I reviewed one of the earlier sections of this and decided to do this one as well since it's here. And i really don't have much to say ...

Hello! I haven't read any of this story before, but since it's been in the green room awhile, I decided to review it. So if I make a mistake and ...

Hello, there! So, for the thing about having different POVs for different chapters, I'd write whose POV it is at the top of the chapter since this is first person. ...

Hello, there! I've got to say, this is written really well, so I may not have much to say. Also, I haven't read any other parts of this story, so ...

I quite liked this. I do suggest having more details in there though. Some small actions or descriptions between all of the dialogue. I think this ran together quite smoothly, ...

Hey, there! I decide to come take a look at this as I have an eating disorder myself. I've also written several bomb essays on it because of that; because ...

Hey, there, I'm Danielle! I see you're kind of new, or at least this is the first story you've posted, so welcome! If you need help or anything just let ...

Hey, there, I'm here to leave a review(as you can see). I haven't been keeping up with this story so I won't mention anything plot-wise since I don't want to ...

Hey, there! I saw you wanted someone to review this, so I figured I'd give it a shot, even though I know next to nothing about poetry, lol. I liked ...

Hey, there! This review probably won't be too long, but I hope it helps. The first thing I want to say is that it feels like I've read this all ...

Hmm. I'm not quite sure what to think about this. It's written *very* well, don't get me wrong, but I'm not sure about who the target audience is. As in, ...

Hey, there! I want to start off by saying I thought your descriptions were really good. There's a lot of imagery in this and I think it worked well for ...