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Re: Never There
Aaaaah, nature. The most versatile topic in poetry. This piece is simple, but I love it-for a piece that was done in only a few minutes, this is an interesting ...
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Re: ramblings of a lunatic
"time moves so fast and i move so slow and i feel so rushed and i have no time for anything. i’m running and running and i can’t catch up ...
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Re: Advertisement
This totally reminds me/reminiscent of something that would pop up in the Percy Jackson series especially when I read: "Blue fire, harvested from the core of Neptune". It also follows ...
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Re: public delights
I love that people write in lowercase on here, it's sort of like it's own little genre. Besides being very aesthetically pleasing to look at, you also craft some beautiful ...
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Re: Moon Over a Sleeping Forest
This is a really interesting way of portraying the moon. I've always thought of the moon to be a sort of celestial, unmoving figure. Something about it made me think ...
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Re: The Road We Have Taken
First of all. Wow, what a way you have with words. I wish I could be half as good as you. I love poetry that leads the reader into the ...
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Re: The Abyss
AAAAAH. Okay, I really, really like the simplicity of this piece. Simplicity can be a really nice too if used nicely, like this. My favorite lines/was: "I was never at ...
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Re: Venus Rising from the Sea
"In a lull he asks, Who made you and the swirling milky sky dips lower, lips drip with moonlight as she answers, Me." I've always been a huge fan of ...
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Re: it hurts to be good.
Hey! I'm gonna review this. It's really clear that this poem is a masterpiece, to me, at least. What really captivated me was the dismal sense of loneliness, but also ...
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