ivanmarrero0211

Very good for such a young writer as you are.

I liked it. Although the events are rather abrupt, you’ve made a solid character, who won’t cry about her mom’s death in the entire selection.

Great. I am a fan of purple too :D. Just one detail, I'd have liked if you had been more explanatory about the emotions.

A poem that overflows tenderness.

Very nice. Hopefully, we'll get to read you book.

It’s a terrific delineation of the pleasures of dancing. The title is a pretty good grabber (personal experience). ;)

My 13-year-old cousin loved it and so did I. Congratulations.

Thank you. I’m a new writer and I truly value your advice. :)

Very good prologue. Good luck with the rest. :)

Excellent unambiguousness of the experiences.

It’s very nice indeed. Although, I collide with the other’s reviewer’s opinions: the last part was somewhat adventitious. Precise use of words. :)