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Hey great writing!! I'm here for a review.... I like how it ends with a question, it leaves the reader hanging but I really like it. I like the pattern ...

I think the idea of this poem is really good and it has good potential but I think you could add a little more. Alongside me, Beside me These are ...

I really like this poem and it is really relatable to a lot of people. I really like the style and how you crossed things out because it is really ...

Hey good poem! I really like the style of you poem and how you did your rhyme scheme, it really flows and is easy to understand. Because seriously, just end ...

Hey! This was really good writing and quite inspirational! Telling me that I can’t be the one. I think the sentences surrounding this one are good, but this sentence doesn't ...

Life can be so many things This is a little broad when you have already said so many lines about what you think life is. Maybe take this line out, ...