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Re: Gloom
Hi MeherazulAzim16, Gloom is definitely the most unique piece of poetry that I've read this year. I really loved the air of mystery that surrounded it, while the idea of ...
Sep 12, 2016 -
Re: Air of freedom
Hi Diap, Your story definitely transported my mind to Angel's world. I love your style of writing. The way you describe situations and emotions is not only vivid but has ...
Sep 12, 2016 -
Re: Katelyn-Superhero In Progress
Hi HopeSummers101, I'll be reviewing your your fine piece of work today To begin with, I would like to say that it was quite an enjoyable read. Despite it being ...
Sep 11, 2016 -
Re: Jolted
Hi Chappiez, First of all, I have to say that this was one epic short story! I totally loved the action in this scene, and the quality of the description ...
Sep 11, 2016 -
Re: Blocked
Hi speakerskat, What an intense poem this is! I like that it's really expressive, and I absolutely love the simplicity here. I also like the suggestive connection between this piece's ...
Sep 11, 2016 -
Re: Solomon
Hi JosephHazel, Are you even 14? Your quality of writing is superb, and even more remarkable when you consider your age. Your narration was very descriptive and it wasn't so ...
Sep 11, 2016 -
Re: Prologue
Hi TheOneNamedZoe, Please allow me to express, but merely, my opinions and recommendations in this review as a lot has already been said that I dare not discount in unnecessary ...
Sep 11, 2016 -
Re: A Winding Road
Hi mavisknightley, I loved these lines "Today this road brings us to places new, First loves, old fractures And oasis's few, but" I liked the poem a lot too. It ...
Sep 11, 2016 -
Re: Hello, Love... Good-Bye, Love...
Hello mb1221, So, I'll be reviewing your piece today. I hope what I say impacts you positively. To begin with, I liked the story. I'm not one for realistic fiction,though, ...
Sep 11, 2016 -
Re: Coffee and Conversations with Jesus
A lovely and well written piece. As always, I judge the inspiration and my oh my was it loads full here. :D I loved the conversation. I kinda always feel ...
Aug 15, 2014 -
Re: Short Story Edited
Hi there. Inspirus here to review your beautiful work. I'll begin with the praise this time, contrary to my normality. I loved this chapter, mainly because it was heartfelt. It ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: The Fourth World: Ch5 Part 3
Hello there! Inspirus here to review your lovely piece of work. Well, I would begin with the nitpicks first. First, I have noticed a repeated pattern of grammatical incorrectness. To ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: My Crazy Adeventures-(M.C.A)Chapter 6: Would I risk everything?
Hey Green Tulip! Well, where to begin. I think i'll start with the nitpicks first. “So are you! I don’t even know you and you act all high (and) mighty. ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: Salvation of Ignorance - Chapter 5: Let This Deter You
Hello There! Let me begin by commenting on the level of language in this piece. I was completely enthralled by it's sophistication. It is clear how extensive your command for ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: deleted
Hi there! Well, allow me to begin with this nitpick that I couldn't help notice. I wonder if there should be an article here. 'by (a) dry Australian bush' I ...
Apr 27, 2014
