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Re: A Letter To Myself
Hi Insane here! I`m going to keep it nice and short since previous reviews have made multiple constructive points. I like that you have a rhyme scheme, it's very rare ...
Jan 11, 2017 -
Re: A Vision Of Hell
This is definitely an odd piece, I don't quite understand what your intention was for this going to review it anyway. "On the night of 31/12/26 I was getting ready ...
Jan 10, 2017 -
Re: (Obsesive)(OBsessive) Obessive (CoMpulsive)(coompulsive) Compulsive...
Hello! A really powerful piece! It`s interesting to have an insight to what it`s like to have OCD. Generally I enjoyed how the poem read, however I agree with @niteowl ...
Jan 10, 2017 -
Re: Me is Not I
Wow! Strangely powerful writing. This Is really relatable,I think society tends to fat shame alot but people don't notice the other end of the scale! The line "became a careless ...
Aug 16, 2016 -
Re: The Silencing
Damn you can really feel empathy with the girl,I think that's down to the lyrical structure of the poem. I like how you have two contrasting leas characters,I think this ...
Aug 11, 2016 -
Re: Through my eyes...
Hi ! Wow! That was amazing!The myriad of amazing adjectives give off such a vivid image it was almost like a film I could picture it so clearly ! I ...
Aug 11, 2016
