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Thanks so much for the review! You were off in some of the details but given how I began the chapter, it's totally understandable (send me a dm on discord ...

that makes more sense. Also, no problem with the link!

*provocative

Just wanted to say two things: 1) this isn't in abab. Here's a link to explain the types of rhyme scheme to you: 2) I never said your poem was ...

I just want to point out that it's important for your characters to be distinct from one another from the get-go. They need to be easy to recognize and have ...

Whoops! I totally misinterpreted Maddie then. Everything up until now make a lot more sense, though keep in mind that other readers may make this mistake, so you might want ...

Just pm a mod (someone in green) with a link to this and they should be able to take it down for you.

Great! I hate it when I get purely grammatical reviews too, so I totally understand. I want to apologize for the probably unhelpful review, but it's your fault for being ...

I'll just review it until I feel that I can't anymore. There probably will be a point that I can't bring myself to do it (I'm an atheist), but for ...

like making the stanzas longer?

what about the formatting did you dislike?

I noticed lol

don't feel bad!11!!111

I just want to say that the reason Asha is being treated badly is not because she's a mage. In fact, she is treated better because of her title than ...

Unfortunately, I already sold my soul on ebay. (back when chat was actually on YWS). I did get a nifty 2 dollars though