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Re: The adventures in Htrae (Chapter 1 )
Hey, Parakahar. Storm here for a review, so let's jump right into it! "Why are you all here and not in the ground? ". First off, your punctuation should always ...
May 28, 2017 -
Re: Open Letter to Mom pt 2 (formerly Mother's day)
Hey, Thisislegacy! Storm here for a review, so let's jump right into it! To be honest, this doesn't seem to be in its best form. Really, a letter would suit ...
May 14, 2017 -
Re: noah's great awakening
Hey, Amie! Storm here for a review, so let's jump right into it. I really enjoyed this as always. Your ability to command my emotions and my attention is truly ...
May 12, 2017 -
Re: My Messed Up Life
Hey, Midnightmoon. Storm here for a review, so let's jump right into it! The writing itself wasn't that bad. It was easy to read and understand what was going on. ...
May 11, 2017 -
Re: Heritage of Good & EVIl
Hey, Wriskypump. Storm here for a review, so let's jump right into it. I'll try to focus on your content, but I'm not going to leave out any issues I ...
May 10, 2017 -
Re: unfinished.
Hey, gabrielgoon. Storm here to do a review, so let's jump right into it! Aaron never relaxed his detest over such strife. You used detest incorrectly here. Staring at the ...
May 9, 2017 -
Re: Ice Dance
Hey, DragonNoir. Storm here for a review, so let's jump right into it! This is. She thought. The last performance of tonight's event. The one which will determine who will ...
May 7, 2017 -
Re: ...
Hey, Keepwriting! Storm here with a review, so let's jump right into it! I'll start the review with this: I am an atheist. I grew up believing in God, but ...
May 4, 2017 -
Re: amethyst heart
Hey, GalaxyUnicornz! Storm here for a review, so let's jump right into it! Throughout the entire poem, you didn't have much flow. I think it's mostly from some of the ...
May 1, 2017 -
Re: Conics Unfortunately: 8
Hey, Ventomology! Storm here for a review this fine Review Day, so let's jump right into it! I've not read any of your previous chapters, but I'll review this to ...
Apr 30, 2017 -
Re: No Destination (Chapter 8: Going Home)
Hey, EnderFlash! Storm here for a review this fine review day, so let's jump right into it! I've not read any previous chapters of this story, but I'll review it ...
Apr 30, 2017 -
Re: Firebreed chapter 5 ---- Ruined Pop Star
Hello, AwkwardMeerkat! Storm here with a review this fine Review Day, so let's jump right into it! I've not read any of the previous chapters, but I'll review to the ...
Apr 30, 2017 -
Re: Viggo's Break - Chapter 2.1 - Taking a running start
Hey, papillote! Storm here for a review this fine Review Day, so let's jump right into it! Since this chapter is so long, I'm only going to review about half ...
Apr 30, 2017 -
Re: Death's Reign Draft 1 Chapter 2
Hey, primadonna. Storm here for a review this fine Review Day, so let's jump right into it! I haven't read your previous chapters, but I think I'll manage considering it's ...
Apr 30, 2017 -
Re: Equivalent Worlds - Chapter Nine
Hey, ScarlettFire! Storm here for a review this fine Review Day, so let's jump right into it! I actually reviewed chapter ten first (oops), but I'll try to keep that ...
Apr 30, 2017