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Re: Is this not love?
*same here*
Thu Apr 02, 2009 3:19 am -
Re: Struck Sightless- prologue
Thank You for all of the great reviews! I love how you mentioned that the story was a little too descriptive, because that is Seacus's talent. It turns out that ...
Mon Mar 30, 2009 1:11 am -
Re: First page of Sensing Wild
Just a this the edited version? If it is I have already done my part. :D
Sat Mar 28, 2009 9:24 pm -
Re: Perfection of Life
There is not much to say, besides me praising it. Your rhythm was perfect, the rhyming didn't seem forced. Ext. Keep up the good work! :D
Sat Mar 28, 2009 5:26 am -
Re: The poem
I think it is perfect, but if you could make a set of word poems, and eventually write a paragraph. :lol: That would be awesome.
Sat Mar 28, 2009 3:18 am -
Re: I'll Always Be Weak
I loved it! It sounded more like thoughts than words, if you know what i mean. There is not anything else i can say about it. Great job! :D
Sun Mar 22, 2009 12:58 am -
Re: To Society:
i liked it, i have never read sarcasm in a poem before!
Sat Mar 21, 2009 4:20 am -
Re: Under the Circumstances
Thanks for all of the reviews, just to say; Shaleer is a girl. I didn't even know that i used the word screech so much, but that is the sound ...
Thu Mar 19, 2009 12:48 am -
Re: I'm Not a 'Nobody'
i have never read anything like it, and i could almost hear the music in my head! Very origional!
Wed Mar 18, 2009 2:01 am -
Re: Blind - Chapter 22
Please keep writing i am addicted to reading your stories, and i have read everything that you have written so far. I don't have anything to say on what you ...
Fri Mar 13, 2009 5:02 am -
Re: Just A Memory
i only have one question who died? PM me please and answer my question i loved it though
Thu Mar 05, 2009 3:29 am -
Re: Pangaea
i know this review is short ,but i loved it! I like the way you put it.
Thu Mar 05, 2009 2:52 am -
Re: It's Breaking Me
I loved it! there is a character in a book that i am writing, and his emotions are parallel to the ones expressed throughout your poem. I would say more ...
Tue Mar 03, 2009 12:32 am -
Re: Change
I like your style of poetry! your opinion shows in your poem a lot! i like it
Tue Mar 03, 2009 12:12 am
