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1. I'd definitely suggest ANYTHING by Jodi Picoult. Right now I'm reading A Change of Heart, and it's absolutley GREAT! 2. Firefly Lane by Kristin Hannah, 3. Memoirs of a ...

Hey wickedwonder here to review , Mihaela ran through the large apartment, trying to find anything It's not really just anything , but the antidotes. . Nate stared at Charlotte’s ...

Hey storiesandsuch here for a quick review ! Let's just get the technical blah out the way (: 1.) You should split this into stanzas. 2.)The rhyming seemed forced. & ...

Hey IainMorrison here to review your piece, Looking down I reached for it but then stopped. I chose not to answer its request for my action. Answer or ignore. You ...

Hey RedRaven here to review !, Okay so I have been following your story & the last couple of chapters have been somewhat of a disappointment. They seem so scattered, ...

Hey Wickedwonder here to review, It wasn’t just the pain Charlotte Tucker felt, it was the hallucinations. Sometimes, she’d envision she was home, sitting in front of the fire on ...

Hey, Here to review! Unlike normal families that pass down jewelry, books, money, etc. There shouldn't be a period there. A comma would have worked. BUT I suggest you think ...

Overall I enjoyed this. At the beginning I wasn't all that interested. Your first sentence didn't really pull me in as much as it should have in my opinion. But ...

Heeeelloo PinkShearwater, :) Here to review . I HOPE YOU READ EVERYTHING!! :) Let's just get the nitpicks over with : I was afraid of bumping into Luke and afraid ...

Hey Persophoneia, Let me get this out of the way and say I only found one nitpick : Remember, when the streets proved too dark for out tastes I'm almost ...

Hey there, Maegardens. Well I agree that this poem needs some improving, like most poems do. I agree with Persephonia, this is more of a rant. You need to add ...

Hey TheEnigma, I Only found one nitpick which is: The grey hoodie, one of from Jack's collection of college jumpers, fell around my thighs, my striped pyjama Pajamas is the ...

Hey Alwaysbeininspired95, I'm just going to tell you my general critique on both your chapters.I'll leave the nitpicks for later. Chapter 4: I really liked this because it gives you ...

Hey ultraviolet, I really enjoyed reading your short story. It captured the feelings of sorrow and pain the girl was having because of her sister's death. I liked how you ...

Hey PinkShearwater , Here to review. I've been following your story ever since i read the first chapter (obviously) because i find it to be great! Well i'm not that ...