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  • Short Story » Culture, Narrative Re: Reversed faith

    Thanks so much for your review!

    May 15, 2021
  • Short Story » Culture, Narrative Re: Reversed faith

    Thanks so much for your review and I appreciate your suggestions, I'll be sure to improve my work. Thanks!

    May 15, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: A play of irony

    Thanks so much and I love your interpretation!

    May 14, 2021
  • Short Story » Horror, Humor Re: An undead phobia

    Ahh thanks so much, I'm so happy that you enjoyed my story!! Yes, I must remember to stay in present tense and your advice is very helpful. Thanks a lot!

    May 14, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Working clockwise

    Thanks so much for your review!

    May 13, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, Culture Re: Ode to death and the grim reaper reaper and my sweet doggo Teds ~love ya~

    Thanks so much for your sympathy and I'll change the title to something that is more suitable- I was thinking the same thing xx

    May 11, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, Culture Re: Ode to death and the grim reaper reaper and my sweet doggo Teds ~love ya~

    Thank you so much for your very helpful review and I completely agree with your suggestions. Thanks!

    May 10, 2021
  • Poetry » Politics, Realistic Re: The farm that is life

    Thanks!

    May 10, 2021
  • Poetry » Culture, Realistic Re: India

    No problem!

    May 9, 2021
  • Poetry » Culture, Spiritual Re: Goodbye Forever World

    Thank you for your lovely review! The end bit is kind of referring to lockdown but it could be applied to childhood traumas too and how they affect our relationships ...

    May 9, 2021
  • Poetry » Culture, Spiritual Re: Goodbye Forever World

    Thanks so much for your review and I like your idea on capitalistion. Sorry if it was a little weirdly put together, I'll try and apply as much advice from ...

    May 9, 2021
  • Other » Realistic, Health Re: To my worst emotions ever felt

    Hey, I totally get this, especially the bit about watching girls in your year grow up so fast and having to pick options for GCSE. I also get this feeling, ...

    May 8, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: Models of Clay

    Aww thanks that's no trouble:)

    May 6, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: Models of Clay

    Thanks so much for your review, sorry if it was kinda confusing, I'll do my best to edit it and provide further context! Xx

    May 6, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: Models of Clay

    Thanks for the very kind review and you provided me insights that I didn't even realise until I read your comment! Many thanks!

    May 4, 2021


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