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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Deep Reflection

    Thank you, I like your suggestion, I think that this would make it flow better. Thank you for your review

    Mar 8, 2021
  • Short Story » Health, Spiritual Re: Light and nature

    That's so sweet, I agree with your suggestions and I get what you mean. I'll be sure to edit my work, this was helpful! I love your interpretation of the ...

    Mar 8, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Deep Reflection

    Thank you! I was experimenting with formatting because I thought that I should try and change my style a little bit, and I'm so glad you like it. Thank you ...

    Mar 8, 2021
  • Short Story » Health, Spiritual Re: Light and nature

    No problem

    Mar 7, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, Health Re: Addiction

    No problem

    Mar 7, 2021
  • Short Story » Health, Spiritual Re: Light and nature

    That's so sweet of you. It was at the moment, yes and I'm so glad that you could feel that too. I'm glad that you liked it! :) Could you ...

    Mar 6, 2021
  • Short Story » Health, Spiritual Re: Light and nature

    Thank you for your review, I'm glad that you liked it

    Mar 6, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Supernatural Re: Prologue - Hanako-San

    No problem, glad I could help.

    Mar 5, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, Spiritual Re: Adventurous times

    Thank you so much, your review is so helpful. The theme of the poem is meant to be about the gist of being young and free like you said, but ...

    Mar 5, 2021
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: Riddle

    Is the first one love? This is just a wild guess.

    Mar 4, 2021
  • Short Story » Romantic, Narrative Re: Love is Seen

    No problem, looking forward to reading your future works

    Mar 4, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: S.T.Z.A.H.S chap 3

    No problem, I'm glad you liked it. Do I write chapter 4, or do we write it together?

    Mar 4, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, Spiritual Re: Adventurous times

    No problem, this was a nice review, I'm glad that you liked it. I'll try and tidy up my poem a bit and maybe explain those lines in deeper context. ...

    Mar 4, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, Spiritual Re: Adventurous times

    Thank you, that's so helpful. I agree with you, and I've seen some people that have really neat styles but I don't know how to do them, so I'm glad ...

    Mar 4, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: test 1-2-28-2021

    I love this. It really made me laugh. I didn't know that you could do that with words. I don't know if anybody else did the same thing, but I ...

    Mar 3, 2021


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