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Est-ce mieux? Is this better?

Once again: Thank you soooo much! I love it when the same people review my stories because I know it is not because they have to, but ecause they want ...

Haha Thank you so much! You are one of the first people who has actually told me they truely enjoy my writing! --Iki

Thank you for yout feedback! I could really use it! Iki

Hi Omniyus! I have just updated this writing, if you wanted to read it again. I have added more detail to the story. Thank tou so much for your feedback! ...

Haha thanks! I have just updated it... If you want to review it again. I was also picturing Effie- but heavier. I have described her more in detail if you ...

Hi thank you so much for the review! I just needed to see if people would like it! I love the feedback! Iki

Thank you so much for the review! I will need to figure out more about Kenzie's world, it is a society that few know about. Rachel, the other character (written ...

Thank you for your feedback. This is my friend's part of the story and she wanted me to put this on the site. Kenzie's hair is supposed to be red, ...

Haha. Thanks, I was really bored so I wrote this, I know it's not the best. It does need a title! Thanks for the idea!

I love this! Reminds me of some boys at my middle school.... :P Some of your dialogue needs capitols at the beginning. ex. "you know what----" Also When you say: ...

Thank You!

Also, sorry if there are any mistakes. It is very hard to type on a Kindle Fire.

Sorry the second quote didn't work.

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