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Who is Budhau? I'm assuming it's the old rat, but I'm not sure. I used to be once a Scout Rat once, as many of you already knows. As many ...

Hi Yolbyi! This is a great start! I love the format because the diary makes it seem like you are talking directly to the reader, which I happen to like. ...

Okay.. Here's your review! I love the ending! The last sentence is amazing! In the second paragraph you have a random capital letter... in the word completely. In the third ...

Okay.. Here's your review! I love the ending! The last sentence is amazing! In the second paragraph you have a random capital letter... in the word completely. In the third ...

Wow! This is even better than the first! Okey dokey then here I go.. brimming coin bag. I would say: bag brimming with gold coins. Okay this is my own ...

Hey! Iki here with your requested review! This story has a great start and the ending makes me want to read more. Like Stella said, I thought she was alone ...

Hi! I found this piece good, but it is not quite great yet... First of all, 'Loosing' should be 'Losing' in the title. Also the line: My imaginary voice was ...

Hola mi amigo! I'm happy to see you have posted more! :D her fiery red hair hung loose to her shoulder blades tied in a French braid. I don't know ...

Wow. Just... Wow. This is really good! I love every bit of it! In the second paragraph you say: But you stop crying for a moment to survey the damage, ...

Hi! I will add comments or changes in red. :) This slumber was like death. This is a cool starting sentance, it makes me want to keep reading My exhaustion ...

Hi! This is really good! I love this poem. There are a few things I would change and I will highlight them in red: I am but a writer Through ...

Hi! This is a really great story! I love the French, because I am taking it in school. One thing: Mademoiselle actually means Miss. Madam means Mrs. The story is ...

Hi! I really liked this story, after reading the Percy Jackson series and enjoying them. This story has great potential! Here are a few things I saw: in the first ...

Hi! I like this poem. It's good but here is what I think: Is that all that bad?-- you say 'that' twice. Maybe say "Is it all that bad" or ...

You say: Lie list so far: _______; let’s see how many I can get 12 times. Use different words to make the story more interesting.