I like this. However, I think it could use more details. It needs more, more life. More description of the blood, maybe a description of how the vampire- I assume it's a vampire- looks, feels in the night. How the nighttime air feels.
And what color are the victim's eyes? Just wondering.
It's a little too short for my taste with the lack of details. However, even without the details it's still an amazing piece. Good work and keep writing.
Points: 88
Reviews: 134
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