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Re: The Conspiring Of Fingertips
The only thing I had a problem on was this: I guess inspiration really does conspire at the fingertips. Which results in that rare moment when your fingers do reach ...
Oct 3, 2011 -
Re: Dance In The Rain.
Not much of a review, but.. I liked it. I've learned to love the rain over the years. I used to hate it, used to think it hindered me from ...
Aug 4, 2011 -
Re: Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets (Twitterized)
I loved it! The only problem was, that with twitter the posts come in as most recent, from last to first, instead of first to last. Now I know for ...
Aug 1, 2011 -
Re: Blood Stops Blue.
This poem reminds me of the music video for Adele's Rolling in the Deep... I loved the imagery and the message, although I can't quite get the whole message without ...
Jun 19, 2011 -
Re: Deleted
I walk along the darkness of the forest, keeping to its shadows. My long flowing hair follows after my every action. Could you add this to the sentence before it? ...
Jun 12, 2011 -
Re: Presents for YWS (Summer Music Mixes)
Thanks for the new playlists! (: I needed something to listen to while I tan-- er, wrote and reviewed. (:
Jun 8, 2011 -
Re: Do not click this.
Cute poem (: there's not much I can do but laugh. Because you told me too. I feel like a dork for clicking on this and feeling evil and defiant, ...
Apr 7, 2011 -
Re: Ahoy!
So this poem is really cute, but the rhythm's just barely off. here are some words that *may* help (: they're in red italics. Walking toward the big cliff's edge, ...
Mar 24, 2011 -
Re: Help
Wow, wow, wow. So you were able to literally and figuratively shape this poem. It's amazing. I don't even have criticism the first time through. The line breaks are a ...
Mar 21, 2011 -
Re: Ask Me, I'm Fine
Hey there, Spork. So, first of all. I like the subject of your poem as well! I think that with a little trimming (or adding, if it helps), it could ...
Mar 20, 2011 -
Re: A Mountain of Hunger
It was perfectly blunt, and just like any good poem, after reading it twice I understood it perfectly. Once, to take in the rhythm, and the second to consume the ...
Feb 3, 2011 -
Re: Dear, Dave
This is very bitter. It fills me with sorrow, in a way, but makes me want to fight against this sick person. Whoo! There's so much emotion in this piece, ...
Feb 3, 2011 -
Re: Running From Death
Wooow! This doesn't seem like death to me as much as it does insanity... but in the end, they're the same thing, aren't they? Ah, I've done a couple pieces ...
Feb 3, 2011 -
Re: Dancing Away The Night
Hey there, Tigersprite. I love the idea of this poem. It's kind of like a hershey's kiss. You just get a little taste of what you want, you know? But... ...
Sep 25, 2010 -
Re: light the torch
Fixed here! I'll be reviewing this. A world gone by is a world a world found new A change of time : is a change of Hope A decade, a ...
Jul 1, 2010
