ibelieve_inme

...Wow. Let me tell you what I think.....[not that it matters] Just leave me be... Stay away from here, and now. Take away the pain once more. Take away the ...

"the muscles last stance" that line seemed like it was missing a sylable. i liked the poem, but i jsut cant get over that one line. i like the wording, ...

So, the same lines that people didnt seem to get, are the ones I loved. example: Insanity; it comes and goes; always almost and almost never always LOVE it. And ...

This made me feel like I was there, in the poem, having it happen to me, personally. That is exactly what poetry should do. It's beautiful and I love it ...

i really like this, because it shows real feeling, from you personally. But itsstill something anyone can relate to. I feel the constant pressure of the world around me, yet ...

Wow...Totally real . I love it, keep it up! I agree, what made you want to write this? (If your anything like me, you meant to write a song or ...

I like the word choices...very detailed, but then again, i cant imagine anything for myself. I definitly like the second version better. It really makes the reader feel...and wonder what ...

the "tone holes" threw me off too, because the rest of the poem is so deep in erotic feelings...or at least thats what you want us to think, right? I ...

Wow...that all I can say. I love it, thats for sure. But I'm also sorry for your loss. You are a good writer though, even in times of sadness, which ...

When I read poetry - What makes it good is the ablilty of the writer to make me think. Deep thought is to be expected when reading poetry, and this ...

Im new to the website, and this is one of the first ive read...and let me say, I like it. Line breaks can be tricky - I have trouble with ...