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So what, you people want me to think that God's an asshole? Whoa... the wonderful world of literature ^_^

Okay, I get it, my poem is lame. Lindsay wanted me to write something that wasn't "depressing". :p

Yeah, Charlotte, like self-harming. The **** that nobody should ever do. Oops, was I allowed to say that on here? Whatever, I don't care. No, you're not allowed -- Firestarter ...

WOWOWOW! I liked it! First of all, let me say that I grin every time I read that :D Thanks for all your feedback guys. You're really helping me grow ...

Colleen- I laughed as I read that title... my brother was probably thinking '...what the heck?' But I digress. The reason my poem's title is so unoriginal is because when ...

Ugh, I'm HORRIBLE at interpreting poetry. I used to have to show my poems to friends and ask them what they meant. I have absolutely no clue what this is ...

Yes, sadly it is. I thought I'd try a little... non-fiction. Thanks for the help with my wording. When I thought about this, it was just kind of blurry in ...

Oh wow, I really like this. I don't see anything wrong with it. It's so true. And cool. Nice vocab use. :)

I agree with Ed- cut the rhyming. Still, I really liked this peice. It gives me a (creepy, but vivid) image of what's going on. Plus... vampires are cool! :)

0.o Creepy. But I liked it. It made me shudder. I think it was well written. I mean, the thoughts dont exactly HAVE to make sense together, seeing as they ...

O.o ...WHAT HAPPENS NEXT??!?!?!!!! I MUST KNOWWWWWWW!!

rotfl!! XD I heart funny scripts. This sounds like something me and my friend would write together... we're award winning authors ya know... anyways, great hilarious commercial script thingy.

HAHAHAHA!!! OH MY GOD I CAN'T BREEEEEEEEATHE!!! I love your title. Even before I read it, I knew it was going to be awesome. :) A work of absolute GENIUS!!!!

This poem is, to me, amazingly clever and original. It's absolutely fantastic to get out of this slump of cliches and read something that's actually... different! I love it.

I really liked this poem, but... for some reason, the last sentence seems like a weakness, in my opinion. I think it's the way you used "sometimes I think" twice ...