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Your rythm was real weird in this poem. :\ After reading the first stanza, I expected a rhyming poem... what happened to that?! I did like that it was original, ...

Yay! Cray-on Lay-onds two!!!!!!!!!!! XD I could hardly contain myself. I do like #1 better, but I liked the part with all the "stupid"s in it. :D Anyways, this was ...

Colorful blocks fell out of their box, sliding and rolling across the hardwood floor. They climbed up onto her bed, slipping underneath her, stacking up, lifting the poor girl until ...

Lol, this is so clever! Not to mention you picked one of my favorite songs/music videos/bands of all time. The words you wrote actually sound sort of like something mcr ...

OMG AET YOU ARE A GENIUS!! lol, either that or you were on some serious drugs when you wrote this... I VOTE GENIUS! xD I am so glad I read ...

To tell you the truth, I had no idea what went on in this story. I mean, I had a clear view of what was happening, and I don't want ...

What happens?!?!?! I want to see more! This was a good start though. Except for a few typos. Paying attention in Miss Coch's maths class was a challenge for anyone. ...

*sniffles* This... this WORK OF ART... is the most -sob- beautiful- sob- story I have ever read!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *sniffles* and when the unicorn was happy again... that was the best part ...

Your teacher is a smart one, he is. :) I actually liked this. It sounded like a song to me... but I totally got the materialistic feel reading it. *shrugs* ...

Okay so here's the deal. At the top of the page in the little blue bar, "The Vampire Queen" was the first thing I saw. I was like "Oo yay! ...

Okay, this is going to sound enormously stupid, but... I'm not sure if I get it. Again, stupid. HEY I'M JUST A FRICKIN KID! GIMME A BREAK!! oh, sorry, the ...

I always love it when guys try to write about girls. It's a win-win situation because I either end up laughing or thinking "Oh my gosh, that was great." I ...

First of all, I really liked this poem as a whole. The length didn't bother me, and I liked, to some extent, what was going on in it. Because, guess ...

Haha, this is clever. But I think like a lot of people have said, you shouldnt have put the artists/songs/albums in bold. it's distracting. Also, I didn't get the poem ...