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Wow, thanks! I was actually just introduced to flash fiction when I started this class. My professor wanted this assignment between 250-750 words (which this one sits at just 746), ...

Thanks so much! I totally agree with your daughter comment; I didn't even catch that. And the whole order thing is something I've been struggling with a little, and considering ...

Haha, thank you! And I feel like that's my fault as well--I've been on less nowadays. One day, for sure, we should sit and have a conversation about it. :P ...

Thank you!

Oh, yeah, I see what you're talking about there. I'll definitely keep those commas in mind while editing! Thanks for the review, and I'm glad you liked it. :'D

Ahh, I see what you're saying. I do have a bad case of talking heads, I will admit. I'll make sure to work with that! And thank you very much ...

Haha, thanks! I had a short story on here that got bumped to 18 because of a few shits and fucks, so I thought this would count as 18 in ...

Thank you very much! I might post about two more chapters of this just to get some more feedback, and that will be it.

Hey, thanks! Yep, that's definitely the vibes going on not only around my friends, but on campus too. But I do agree that it totally pays off in the end. ...

Thanks! Yeah, it is quite a blow. I do understand where he's coming from but at the same time, I stand where you stand as well. I've told him to ...

Ah, I see what you're saying there. I'll definitely think of a way to change that. Thanks!

Thank you very much for the review! Yeah, that whole 'Jaime got sad' bit was the work of a word limit (I couldn't be as descriptive as I wanted), but ...

I'll do so soon. Thanks!

Hey, Peng. c: This actually is a creative non-fiction, and I don't think I was trying to go anywhere with it other than tell what happened over the summer and ...

Thanks, Matt. :D I honestly expected so much more mistakes since I did this late at night, and yeah, I totally agree with what you said above. I'll get to ...