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Yo, Nate. I'm a month and a few days late with this review, I know, but let's just pretend I've been timely with my promises, yeah? Great. So, uh, wow. ...

Hello again, Infinite! Wow, this prequel was considerably better than the Beggar Boy. Not saying that the last was bad, because they're both well written, but I can see here ...

Hey, Mikayla! I'm going to have to jump right in and say this, but you've really got to break up this huge paragraph you have here. Take note that since ...

Yo, Memory! Wow, you've got some powerful ideas written here. I can totally relate to this feeling of being discouraged, especially with writing (which I assume is what you're talking ...

Hey, Jacqueline! This is a good first chapter you have here. You've successfully introduced each character and given them their own voice and set of personality traits that they all ...

Yo, aisumi! Welcome to YWS! All I can say about this piece is wow . You've got such strong vocabulary that I even had to search up some of the ...

Yo, Shadow! Man, you really succeeded in making that uncle a slimy jerk. Every description you set for him worked perfectly, and at a point I ended up hating him ...

Yo, Infinite! Can I just say I think you should experiment with short stories more? This was pretty good and interesting to read, and I had a hard time finding ...

Hey there, Felistia. c: This was a cool short to read, though I wish you would add more to it to make it a full short rather than a two ...

Yo, BFF, and welcome to YWS! I thought this was a pretty cool idea for a short story. It kind of reminded me of those animes that deal with virtual ...

Hey there, Sofiass. c: Welcome to YWS! This is an interesting story you got here. I liked the way you built the world in a concise yet understandable way. Usually ...

Yo, Grace. c: So you've got some nice descriptions going on here, though I've got to be honest with you; because of the pretty prose, I often lost track of ...

Hey, thewriterinside! This is a pretty cute story you got here. I'm usually not one for romance so I was hoping for some sort of fantasy element in this, but ...

Yo, Jack. c: So you totally reeled me in with the simplicity thing you stated in the description. I also love writing shorts about simple things that occur in our ...

Yo, Ronald. c: So the description set for this story is what got me interested, and boy, this wasn't what I expected at all. I was almost expecting a feel-good ...