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Re: Loneliness is not that bad
Hey there. This really hit the spot for me. I'm alone most of the time and I can easily relate to this so much. I think you did a really ...
Apr 22, 2014 -
Re: Some Words
Hello. I really enjoyed this little piece. It really hit my heart right on the spot. It's true and I loved how you used repetition of, ' some words are' ...
Apr 22, 2014 -
Re: I long to catch the ocean
Hello. I actually really enjoyed reading this little poem. So good job on your part. :)
Apr 22, 2014 -
Re: I long to catch the ocean
Hello. I actually really enjoyed reading this little poem. So good job on your part. :)
Apr 22, 2014 -
Re: Insomnia
Hello. I loved this writing piece so much. It gave me feelings and emotions and memories as well. I loved this. Great job!
Apr 22, 2014 -
Re: Not the Same
Thanks for the amazing review. I guess with Poetry, I still need some more experience on writing Poetry. Thanks. I'll make sure to develop more
Apr 22, 2014 -
Re: Memory is a Life with no Form
Hello. I really did love this poem. Each line brought back feelings and memories for me and really did catch my eye.
Apr 22, 2014 -
Re: Lame Game Boy
Amazing job. I loved it. :)
Mar 14, 2014 -
Re: Not the Same
Thanks. I'll try to fix those things in the future but how I put my poem the way it is, is kind of the way I want it to be, ...
Mar 14, 2014 -
Re: Not the Same
Thanks for the comment. I'm glad that I did get my point across and I'm sorry if it seems a bit dark but I just wanted to show my poetry ...
Mar 13, 2014 -
Re: Never gonna Forget ( Paul Lahote love story)
I'm so sorry! I'm new to this so I dont know how to work the site.
Jan 1, 2013 -
Re: Never gonna Forget ( Paul Lahote love story)
Sorry I'm new to posting the chapters. Her mother's family isn't around them anymore because her mother was kicked out of the family for being in love with her husband. ...
Jan 1, 2013 -
Re: Never gonna Forget ( Paul Lahote love story)
I put the days of the week to help the reader understand what is happening in each day.
Jan 1, 2013 -
Re: Never gonna Forget ( Paul Lahote love story)
Sorry. I'm supposedly really good in my english class but I have some difficulties in some areas.
Jan 1, 2013 -
Re: Never gonna Forget ( Paul Lahote love story)
Sorry I'm a bit new to this website so I don't know how to most chapters a t a time. Thanks for your advice.
Jan 1, 2013
