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Re: Loneliness is not that bad
Hey there. This really hit the spot for me. I'm alone most of the time and I can easily relate to this so much. I think you did a really ...
Tue Apr 22, 2014 12:47 am -
Re: Some Words
Hello. I really enjoyed this little piece. It really hit my heart right on the spot. It's true and I loved how you used repetition of, ' some words are' ...
Tue Apr 22, 2014 12:44 am -
Re: I long to catch the ocean
Hello. I actually really enjoyed reading this little poem. So good job on your part. :)
Tue Apr 22, 2014 12:40 am -
Re: I long to catch the ocean
Hello. I actually really enjoyed reading this little poem. So good job on your part. :)
Tue Apr 22, 2014 12:38 am -
Re: Insomnia
Hello. I loved this writing piece so much. It gave me feelings and emotions and memories as well. I loved this. Great job!
Tue Apr 22, 2014 12:33 am -
Re: Not the Same
Thanks for the amazing review. I guess with Poetry, I still need some more experience on writing Poetry. Thanks. I'll make sure to develop more
Tue Apr 22, 2014 12:03 am -
Re: Memory is a Life with no Form
Hello. I really did love this poem. Each line brought back feelings and memories for me and really did catch my eye.
Tue Apr 22, 2014 12:00 am -
Re: Lame Game Boy
Amazing job. I loved it. :)
Fri Mar 14, 2014 4:14 am -
Re: Not the Same
Thanks. I'll try to fix those things in the future but how I put my poem the way it is, is kind of the way I want it to be, ...
Fri Mar 14, 2014 4:12 am -
Re: Not the Same
Thanks for the comment. I'm glad that I did get my point across and I'm sorry if it seems a bit dark but I just wanted to show my poetry ...
Thu Mar 13, 2014 3:31 am -
Re: Never gonna Forget ( Paul Lahote love story)
I'm so sorry! I'm new to this so I dont know how to work the site.
Tue Jan 01, 2013 8:17 pm -
Re: Never gonna Forget ( Paul Lahote love story)
Sorry I'm new to posting the chapters. Her mother's family isn't around them anymore because her mother was kicked out of the family for being in love with her husband. ...
Tue Jan 01, 2013 8:16 pm -
Re: Never gonna Forget ( Paul Lahote love story)
I put the days of the week to help the reader understand what is happening in each day.
Tue Jan 01, 2013 8:13 pm -
Re: Never gonna Forget ( Paul Lahote love story)
Sorry. I'm supposedly really good in my english class but I have some difficulties in some areas.
Tue Jan 01, 2013 8:13 pm -
Re: Never gonna Forget ( Paul Lahote love story)
Sorry I'm a bit new to this website so I don't know how to most chapters a t a time. Thanks for your advice.
Tue Jan 01, 2013 8:12 pm
