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Re: Chalice of Life: Chapter 4
Hi yizhongt, Hunith here to submit a view. RED ALERT!! This review may sound a bit harsh. but don't worry; it's for the good of your writing I must say ...
Jul 23, 2015 -
Re: Chalice of Life: Chapter 3
Hello Yizhongt, Hunith here. Umm, i must say you have improved since the last chapter and that's great I really enjoyed this episode. You truly have improved with your narration, ...
Jul 14, 2015 -
Re: Shot In Heaven
Hi, Hunith here to review your work; shot in heaven First of, this is a great piece. I really enjoyed it-- of course; after i had read it for about ...
Jul 8, 2015 -
Re: Chalice of Life: Chapter 2
Hi there, this is Hunith. Here to review The Chalice Of Life. As usual, the story is very good and is finally beginning to grow and undoubtedly into a very ...
Jul 6, 2015 -
Re: The Tree People (Working Title) Chapter 1
hi there, Hunith here; I must say, i love the idea of the story. it is pretty unused and original. It's awesome. However, there are some few things, i want ...
Jul 3, 2015 -
Re: The Chalice of Life: Chapter 1
Hi, this is Hunith. well, i've been following the chalice of life and i think the story is very good and intriguing. I literally ate your pages. This story carries ...
Jul 1, 2015 -
Re: Dangerous Creatures
This is a very good story and i liked it. i like the command you have over your writing and your endless supply of vocabulary. however, i noticed you over ...
Jun 28, 2015 -
Re: Chilled Bones - The Introduction I
Hi, Hunith here I'd like to commend you on this work, t'was almost flawless... i liked the smooth flow of your narration, and how each action eased into the other. ...
Jun 28, 2015 -
Re: A Scale of Power- Chapter Four
Hello... Love your work, it's pretty simple and straight forward. I must say, i enjoyed the drama and action and will be looking forward to more episodes. there're however some ...
Jun 27, 2015 -
Re: Untitled Fantasy Story: The Chalice of Life: Prologue
well i think, it's great. and i'd really want to know whether Naxzaros would survive the fall. however when it comes to magic or combat of any sort, the way ...
Jun 26, 2015
