horrendous

i take the MC is you? i don't know whether this is intended as a literary work, but you submitted so i'll review. you mention your crappy past and all ...

your ways with words never cease to please me. the way you describe people and places is so existential, as though there's something bigger and more meaningful behind everything, even ...

horrendous with a review. my initial thought was that the MC was a human hunter who utilized traps and poison to hunt game. the more i read, the more that ...

i love short, gripping stories, and this was one. the MC claims he'll tell you the short version of the story, then goes off about all the mundane things he ...

horrendous, here for a review. this story was pretty good. the plot made me think of Wolf's Rain, which is good because that show is amazing and this story has ...

hey, i've got a review for you. this story was quite entertaining. the description given for this story caught my interest, and when i started reading i was wondering what ...

i'm glad i checked this out. i came into this expecting a bite sized horror story, but i'm pleased at how it slowly progressed into personal commentary, and even though ...

this is excellent. your ability to create compelling characters should be applauded. Red's motives, desires and ultimate purpose may be seen as hedonistic to some, but i've gotta respect the ...

i don't know whether you're just messing around or actually trying to make a point with this, but it had me laughing. even if didn't intend any sort of message ...

well, i'm going to have to disagree with your other reviewers. this story definitely had some gory, sickening scenery, but i think it was used to little effect. now i'll ...

this story made me feel pretty good. i wasn't sure where you were going with it til "dancing plague". that concept and the preceding story just made me grin. i ...

hey, got a review for you. i liked your story, the circumstances the main character is in are pretty intriguing, seeming to be the lone occupant of a city (although ...

this story was just great. you've taken a concept that on its face is kind of silly - a city where acting morally is illegal - and were able to ...

this story felt a bit incomplete to me. we discover that this girl can create new dimensions. pretty interesting. a creature emerges from one of these dimensions. very cool. the ...

i'm not really sure how this is an homage to Dali, but whatever. this is so different from what i'm used to reading on this site - it's short and ...