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Re: Toys
To me this poem is original and creative. I don't really like the fact that you're comparing with toys though! Then again that's where it's original - not many people ...
Feb 8, 2006 -
Re: A script I wrote for SS...it's not exactly formatted right..
Okay now that was really funny :lol:
Feb 7, 2006 -
Re: The City That Rages In My Head
Hi sis! Yes I'd have to agree that the rhyming is good, but remember when mum first read it out - that was funny!
Feb 7, 2006 -
Re: Summer Wine
That piece of poetry was very descriptive.... ... I really enjoyed the bit about the honey bees!
Feb 7, 2006 -
Re: War
I agree with Skye Demon that this poem is very moving. I also think that it's a good length too.
Feb 7, 2006 -
Re: No One
What a sweet poem! It IS short though. Other than that, well done 8)
Feb 4, 2006