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Re: It's Not You, but It Isn't Me, Either
This is so perfect. I love poetry like this, it's so raw and emotional and beautiful. "I thought we were building and building but the bricks we used were made ...
Sun Jun 30, 2013 12:05 am -
Re: Don't Tell Me
This is so beautiful. I agreed with every word you said and it flowed so magnificently and elegantly that I just want to read it over and over again. This ...
Sun Jun 30, 2013 12:04 am -
Re: Rebel's love
I really liiked this story. At first I was a little skeptical but as it went on I liked it more and more. Because its a short story I think ...
Sat Apr 07, 2012 8:47 pm -
Re: A Beauty Never To Be Seen - Ch. 2 & 3
I read the first chapter and is this still the same story? It seems totally different. Anywhooo I think you need to re-read this. There were a lot of little ...
Sat Apr 07, 2012 8:41 pm -
Re: Life's A Process
This is one of the best things I have seen on here in a while. If it is a novel please PM me when you post more. There is nothing ...
Mon Jan 30, 2012 10:42 pm -
Re: Letting Go - Chapter One
This was wonderful. I couldn't take my eyes off the page. I don't feel there is anything you need to change. PM me when you postmore (:
Thu Aug 11, 2011 5:07 am -
Re: Lessons Learned [ch.1]
this was reallly good but I agree here should be her. I also think you should describe more. Like what they look like, wear, etc. PM me when you post ...
Thu Aug 11, 2011 4:46 am -
Re: My Aborted Child
This is a REALLY good story, there isn't much to improve that other people have not already pointed out. (: So good job! -pghpenguins
Tue Apr 05, 2011 10:54 pm -
Re: Sometimes (working title) Chapter one
this was good, sure there were some mistakes, but you will find those when you re-read this. PM me when you post more, or just write on my wall, either ...
Thu Mar 17, 2011 11:50 pm -
Re: Self-Actualization
I like this poem, I agree some of the lines didn't make sense but that may just be me. Good poem though. Jenn
Thu Mar 10, 2011 11:01 pm -
Re: "F" = Failure
This is really good. I liked it a lot. Keep writing. PM me when you post more work. Jenn
Thu Mar 10, 2011 10:45 pm -
Re: Random
I really liked this poem although I do think you should change the title to something else, right now the poem could be about romance, or killings or anything. Keep ...
Sun Dec 26, 2010 9:39 pm -
Re: Mask
very dramatic definitely the right folder :) haha. Touching though and relatable too:)
Sun Dec 26, 2010 9:27 pm -
Re: First time writing poetry
This is good I like how it flows and it is really well written by the way. Keep up the good work. jenn
Sun Dec 12, 2010 2:40 pm -
Re: What happened? I don't want to talk about it.
I reallly liked this and think you need to make it into a novel. although I do think you emphasized the fact that she hated him way to much, but ...
Sun Dec 05, 2010 6:02 am