hobbes

in the title i thought you meant "cell" as in cell phone, and the first line is "trapped always behind my bars" i found it kinda funny

Question: do you know what a phobia of starfish is called?

i dont hate it, i just dont really like it, thats all. and when you "read and critique" something, its impossible to toss all your beliefs aside when you rate ...

well you see, we had to write a poem about death for my L.A. class. most kids were depressing and dreary. but if we cant laugh at death, what can ...

so sue me!!! i never puntuate totally, and i never will!

alright, i admit it, i didn't come here to critique. just to say, 27!!!!!! you have just added more proof to the 27 conspiracy. good job. you should be proud. ...

thanks peoples

coolness. good ryhming and what-not. but i think your mom loves you too uch to leave you alone. she knows you need comforting or whatever and wants to help. --markus ...

thanks. fixed the he to his. and to any one else, i never punctuate or capitalize, so please dont say anything.

I totally agree with the ghost. some poems are best left unexplained. as for the poem, it was wonderful. yep................. stay circus -- hobbes --

sounds....fun. pretty much what that Yatta person said. yeah....... --monday--

hmmm......yep. thats a poem alright. anyways, yeah, pretty good. not my favorite but definitly awesome. basically every thing that nerd above me said(kidding!) --jukebox hero/boy wonder--

thanks

not sure what it means, but i like it

drastic change is a good thing right? just listen to the presidential candidates, "we want change!" "change!" "we need change" --mark-- :smt110