hobbes

yeah man, rating is kinda dumb, but you should definitly rate this thing. VAMPIRES TURN TO DRY BONES IN THE SUNLIGHT PEOPLE. jeez...... yeah, im sorry, i didnt really like ...

sticking is when you throw a grenade and it sticks to an enemy. this poems kinda funny. I'm not really into halo, but I've played it enough to know what ...

this poem is amazing. just plain amazing. it might be because i love an angel myself, i dont know. Angel, put your hands in my pockets what exactly are you ...

i know!!! i thought the exact same thing. this christmas was just like, "hey, heres christmas. oh look, there it goes." but 3 years ago christmas was like "oh my ...

wow....this is....wow. that was one of the best writings I ever read. you know, I don't think anyone could even begin to dissect this. It so...........I cant even think of ...

this was an excellent essay but I disagree on some parts. Yes, it is mean to test products on animals and abuse them, but eating them is a different story. ...

nice. I like the way this poem flows. It's very rhythmic (is that a word?) I'm pretty sure you have all the punctuation stuff right. all in all, it's a ...

wow.that...was...cool. that has some very deep meanings in it, that I would not expect from a 17 year old.you have a good outlook on life. just a question, what religion ...

yea......everybody kinda beat me to everything. but,this was excellent story line.this might be blasphemy or somthin(isn't it bad to like change the bible around? I don't remember Jesus having a ...

yea.... I read this before and I wasn't sure if that was intentional or not ( 3rd and 4th lines), but that definitly threw me off. I had to reread ...

first of all, FIREWORKS ARE AWESOME!!!! they EXPLODE!! whats cooler than that? now, if you also dislike vanhalen and the foo fighters,you really need to rethink your style. (haha) now, ...

hmmmmmmm....well, i did enjoy. stupendous poem yet again good grammer and punctuation( is that how you spell it?) and all that i think the last line fits fine. -mark ake:hobbes ...

honestly? that's how she goes? one man killed her? I think that after all shes been through she should've fought five people and killed them all, ignoring the pain searing ...

first off, first line I think you could get rid of. second, a boss can't tell you to work overtime.its against the law.he could only ask them to. third, [quote]one ...

sorry dude, but this did nothing for me. In the beginning of the story there was no hook to get me into it. you had good descriptions and you got ...