hippie_vampire

(I have been sick for a week and am not thinking clearly so forgive me if my review sucks.) Hey Apple, I really like this story so far:) I did ...

I am technically doing Script Frenzy but I'm doing this month instead of next because farmer's market starts next month and I will have vary little free time. But I ...

I've only read about half of it so far because we where reading as a family (we all love Neil Gaiman...including my 12-year-old brother) but I'm considering finishing it myself ...

Read them if you've got three weeks of time to spare. You kidding? I couldn't put them down! And I read them--all 12--in one week! I didn't bother going to ...

Hello twilight12, I too think that it should be cut down a little. But I do not think that it's necessarily based strongly on twilight. One thing that did confuse ...

About the same as last chapter. Good, but it didn't really go anywhere. :arrow: I really liked how the guitar was described. :arrow: The green eyed boy kinda seems to ...

haha I love the ending! I love how you whate till just the last secant to say what the poem is really about. Bad phone service! :smt044 The only thing ...

I agree with Kaedee, this chapter doesn't really take the plot anywhere. Though the chair the queen uses dose remind me of the show Dollhouse (if anyone's seen that.) There ...

I like this but I think it needs a little more description of the place we are in. Because as she said that it wasn't earth so what is it? ...

Hello kayay123, I really liked the symbolism in this poem but it had a really hard time flowing. Try spacing it out more rather then big chunks that kind of ...

This was awesome! I really liked all the detail you put in to this but I do think that it could have used a little more with the people themselves. ...

Hello darkwriter15, This was really awesome! I really liked your use of words and metaphors. Just one little thing confused me. Pardon me if I'm just being stupid but: pulling ...

Hello, I have come to review you! We met one night, in the dark, the fear, We exchanged smiles, I held my glass up to you, played with my hair, ...

And many came to glimpse the fall and the horror spread through one and all their eyes were covered so they'd not see the pain that visited me and thee ...

This is really good. I like the thing about the tiny lion :D I was however wondering about the history thing. Was this supposed to be the first time the ...