Hello darkwriter15,
This was really awesome!
I really liked your use of words and metaphors.
Just one little thing confused me. Pardon me if I'm just being stupid but:
pulling me down into the inky
Blackness,
Was the inky and blackness supposed to be part of the same statement? Because to me "pulling me down into the inky" doesn't make much scene. Again, pardon me if I'm just being stupid.
All in all I think you did a really good job
hippie_vampire
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