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Re: Thoughts about love and life
I also do think that people rush into "love" and don't truly find it because they might feel forced because of their friends, family, age, needing attention, etc. I would ...
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Re: Casino TARDIS
I did like how you worded the poem it seemed (clearly) very thought out from beginning to end. I also enjoyed the Dr. Who references, I found that pretty cool ...
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Re: I Believe In Myself
I know everyone experiences something like this type of a situation in life and some people have not gotten through it. This is clearly very inspiring and I hope to ...
May 10, 2016 -
Re: A Pen
I like this new perspective of a pen and how the world almost revolves around it. This is definitely a take on a pen I have not heard of before, ...
May 10, 2016 -
Re: Impatiently Loving
I really like how you used a garden growing as a metaphor to love, it really had a good balance between the metaphors and what's actually happening to the character ...
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Re: irl
I like how you define the difference between what is "real" and "not real". The poem was very well worded and I found it very easy to connect to, sometimes ...
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Re: Sorrowful...
I enjoy how you organized your work. The word choice is amazing; you consistently paint pictures of how you feel and what you believe. It's depressing and hopeful at the ...
May 9, 2016
