hermione315

Thank you so much for your review! You are very kind, and I will definitely check into those sources.

Thanks for your review. I just changed my poem using Arkhaion's advice about the content of it, and I wish that I could change the punctuation from the advice you ...

Thanks for explaining! Your poem makes a lot more sense to me now.

Thanks for the kind review!

Thanks so much for your very kind review! *Hits 'Follow Back' button* :)

Thanks for the review! This isn't exactly the interpretation I had originally intended, but as the reader you're encouraged to interpret this poem in any way you want. What I ...

Thanks for the review!

Thanks for the review, it was very helpful. :) I tried breaking up the lines differently and I think I like it better. What do you think?

You're welcome! And those verb inconsistencies aren't anything that should be too awful hard to fix. Tell me if you need anymore help figuring those out in your writing.

Thanks a lot for this review. I knew this poem needed a lot of work, and it's helpful that you pointed out the places where the message I was trying ...

Do you think how I split it up looks okay?

Thank you so much for the review! It was very helpful. I'm going to go through and replace the word 'waiting' in some spots, because I agree that it was ...

How you are thinking of fixing it sounds much better. I'm glad I could help!

Alright, thanks for the help.

Thanks for the review! I will try doing what you said and punctuating this poem like prose.