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Wow, thank you so much for your review. It was very encouraging! And I'll see about the music...I kind of have a tune picked out for the chorus, but it ...

Thanks for your review!

Cool! I get it now. Just to clarify, is everyone in this world either a witch, wizard, or magical creature of some sort or are there regular people unaware of ...

Okay, about the Sherlock name :) Your story really doesn't differ much from Harry Potter. There's a magic school, similar subjects are taught there, the first years are the same ...

Hi there! Thanks for your review! You pointed out a typo: it was supposed to read as "storms, winds, nor treacherous tides". When you read it this way instead, it ...

I put the bit about the model cars in there to show Kade's character (he gets distracted easily), so it wasn't completely random. I will work on revising this to ...

I plan on my characters eventually travelling to the ancient world, but in chapter two, they will be travelling forward in time one day. Thanks for your review!

Thanks for your review and the like!

Thanks for your review! I'll make the corrections.

The last line of your poem made me smile. I agree with you; this is golden. :)

Hi! Welcome to YWS! I adored your poem. If you can't tell from my username, I'm a HUGE fan of Harry Potter, and I like how you used that as ...

I agree with you that I should take out the word conventional, and I think I'm going to play around with the line that has the word 'perilously' in it. ...

Thanks for your review!

Thank you Grace for your encouraging review! I'm glad this makes you want to write more, because writing is awesome! :)

Thank you! You are so sweet and encouraging. :)