herbgirl

Hello! herbgirl here for a review! This was an interesting idea for a story. Just having a person walk up to you and tell you you're better off dead, and ...

Hello! herbgirl here for a review! To start, I'd like to say I like your writing style. I haven't read much of your stuff, if any, but from this piece ...

Hello! herbgirl here to review! I liked your poem here. It is very, for lack of a better word, poetic. It's descriptiveness, though rather gory, makes it an interesting read, ...

Hello! herbgirl here for a review. So, this was a very interesting piece. I like the overall idea, and I like the way you slowly introduced the reader to the ...

Hello, herbgirl here for a review. OH MY GOSH. Ok, so I'm not entirely sure how you did this, but this piece was surprisingly powerful. I started reading, and I ...

OK SO herbgirl here gonna review your poem before anyone else hopefully! To start off, I would like to say I really like your free form poems. They always get ...

Hello! herbgirl here for a review! So I like your poem, because you chose a very big topic to tackle, and I felt you covered it well. I thought at ...

Hey SilverBerry, bro! Just smol herbgirl here to help out your poem! I'd like to start off by saying that the idea you based this poem off of was very ...

Hello! herbgirl here for a review! I feel like I've been reviewing a bunch of your stuff lately, or at least reading it. And every time I read something of ...

Hello, and welcome to YWS! I'm herbgirl, here to give you some advice on your poem. To start off, I'd like to say that I like your poem, just the ...

Hello! herbgirl here for a review! I'll start with saying that I really liked this poem. It was, in the simplest description, poetic. I liked your last stanza in particular, ...

Hello! herbgirl here for a review! First of all, I really like this kind of poem, the free form with cool formatting. The beginning was very nice, and it really ...

Hello! herbgirl here for a review! So first of all, I really like your poem. The imagery is beautiful, and a little strange, but all the better for it. I ...

Hi! herbgirl for a review here! To start off, this poem was a good idea. The way you compared this girl to flowers, while incorporating the flower "meanings" was very ...

Hi! herbgirl here for a review! So, this is a very short, freestyle poem, which some people can really bomb, but I really liked this. It's very poetic, and paints ...