herbgirl

This poem is a little bit confusing. I don't like how you ended it, it does tie it up, though. It, to me, just repeated a confusing fact. Still, this ...

Wow. This is in kind of a new set up. I like how you did it, though. It seems to give it more volume. The font is nice. In the ...

First of all, silence. ... Now, down to buisness. I really appreciate the message in this poem. The format is great and I also think the length of the stanza's ...

I really like this poem. I t kind of flows along well, which I liked. At points when I thought it might not rhyme to well it turned out fine. ...

Ummm...Okay. That was kind of strange. It confused me but it seemed to rhyme well. I like that it seems that you covered a lot of stuff in such a ...

Hi, i'm herby, here to reveiw. I love this poem. I think it is the perfect length, and it rhymes very well. You don't get stuck on things and repeat ...

I liked this poem. You made it all ryhme and flow very well. I didn't see any spelling mistakes. Which is good. For me, the first couple stanzas explained it ...

Woah. That was deep. I love how poetic it was. The words just flowed together, perfecting each other. I love the last stanza. Truly poetic, it ties it all up ...

My first question is: Have you read all the books? If you have you will see that some part differ from the book. I mostly agree with you. I agree ...

I love this "beginning"! I like how you were descriptive. I liked how you explained the importance of pink in this story. I have a feeling it will be relevant. ...

First of all, I love the name 'Alistar'. I just think it is a really good name. I like how you kept this short, that way I think it's more ...

In general, I like this poem. Before I compliment you, though, I'm gonna be mean. I didn't like how you didn't capitalize the i's. Well, I sorta did because it ...

Ok, I'm sorry, but, I found this vaugly confusing. The way you sort of switched topics confused me, even though this is just supposed to be a collection of information. ...

I love how this poem tells part of a story, it sort of shows theres more to this than the eye can see. Also, I like how this could take ...

I was imeadiately confused when I saw the numberings. Then I realized that it was merely emphasising the point that it was a short poem. I love how described the ...