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Re: not all surprises want to be unwrapped.
Hello! herby here for a review. I like this poem. It kind of represents how my mind is set right now, although not really about Christmas. I liked the sixth ...
Dec 23, 2015 -
Re: Avery Trent - Chapter 2 (Jason Volks)
Well, another good story! I'm really starting to like this Avery guy. I really like your writing style, but I feel like your lacking detail. Like, I have no idea ...
Sep 13, 2015 -
Re: Avery Trent - Chapter 1 (Renegade Sneeze)
Hahaah ahaha ha! Oh my gosh! This was fabulous! Absolutely fabulous! Okay, let me just compliment you for a little longer. I thought this was really funny! SEarching for a ...
Sep 13, 2015 -
Re: Cost of Memories
Hi! This is herbgirl, and I'm here to review your poem! This was a really nice poem. However, I don't feel like there was enough emotion in it. You seem ...
Apr 27, 2015 -
Re: there was a time
Wow! This is a great poem! When I first started reading it I thought it was just going to be 'oh, a kid grew up, now they regret it, blah ...
Apr 25, 2015 -
Re: in which two people fall out of love
Hello! herby here for a review! I really like this poem. Like you said you'd never really done anything like this, I've never read anything like this, and I think ...
Mar 4, 2015 -
Re: Pinky Fingers and Whispered Words
Hi! herby here for a review. This is a really cute poem. The quaint, wild, idea of a childhood friendship that morphs into a tight bond all through adolescence. It ...
Mar 2, 2015 -
Re: Deleted 55
Hello! This is herby, here for a review. I'll start with the title. I think it fits the poem absolutely perfect. Next, I really like the beginning of this poem. ...
Mar 2, 2015 -
Re: Oddball Object {1}
Hello! herby here for a review! First of all, I really like your new idea for a series. Have you got any others like it out yet? I would love ...
Mar 1, 2015 -
Re: To Own A Cat
Hey! herby here for a review! I LOVE THIS POEM!!!!! It is so relatable, right? I own a cat, we don't really know how old she is because she was ...
Mar 1, 2015 -
Re: The Child
Hello! herby here for a review! So, first of all, I really like the sense of mystery in this poem. It makes you want to know more about what happened ...
Mar 1, 2015 -
Re: His name was John
Hello! This is herby, reporting for a review! First of all, great title. It really drew me in, as did the first couple of sentences. I saw some things you ...
Feb 28, 2015 -
Re: I Remember Then
Hi! I'm herby, here to review! I like this poem. I like it especially because it is relatible. I have the same feeling of missing what I had when I ...
Feb 28, 2015 -
Re: idk first poem---not very good
Hey, this is herby here for a review! First of all, I like the length of this poem. I write short poems too, and our readers may think we're just ...
Feb 28, 2015 -
Re: Plenty of fish in the sea (Short funny poem)
Ha! I think this is funny! You start reading it, and your all serious, then it ends with a laugh! Great! Of course you could have meant it symbolicly, but ...
Dec 12, 2013
