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  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Fragile Breaths

    Hi! herbgirl here for the review! First of all, I would like to say I really like the picture this poem paints in the mind. The person's feelings you describe ...

    Mar 27, 2016
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: Don't cry, my friend.

    Hello, buddy! It's herby, here for a review! So, to start off, I'd like to say that I really do like this poem. I think it captures the feeling of ...

    Jan 5, 2016
  • Poetry » Literature, Narrative Re: Self Inside the Self

    This is one powerful poem! It has just this powerful vibe to it, like the person depicted, who in you said was you, had completely come to terms with who ...

    Jan 5, 2016
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: .

    Hello! This was a pretty ok poem. The idea that it expressed was interesting and I find that I can relate to your or your characters uncertainty over what is ...

    Dec 27, 2015
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: Goal!!!!!

    I think this review is gonna come out a little harsh, so I am apologizing in advance right now. Sorry! This poem has a good theme to it, but the ...

    Dec 27, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Set Me Free Too

    This is a pretty good poem! I like how it has this serious, almost depressing mood, which you acknowledge at the end, but also admit that there is still a ...

    Dec 27, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Over and over and over

    I love this poem! There is this great rhythm to it, and it seems to me to follow the thoughts of one who cannot sleep, at first focusing on discomfort, ...

    Dec 27, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Posies

    This is absolutely adorable! It is clear, to the point, and very sweet. I see absolutely no problems with this poem, it's very enjoyable. You know, I'm not sure if ...

    Dec 27, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Hope

    Whoa! This is just... Wow! So impressive! The imagery is great, which, as I said before, I love. You seem to easily create your feelings into characters you know and ...

    Dec 26, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Writer of Things

    This is a very good poem! I especially like towards the middle the imagery that you used. As I tell all my reviewees, I LOVE imagery, and I encourage its ...

    Dec 26, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Wall

    I like this poem! It summarizes this part of this story that we heard at school last year, that a philosopher used to tell his students. Except, in that version, ...

    Dec 26, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Night and Day

    Very pretty poem! I like the concept of a relationship between night and day, it seems very sweet and innocent, but it could also have a deeper meaning, if you ...

    Dec 26, 2015
  • Poetry » Other, Realistic Re: holidays

    This poem is... just incredible. I am at a loss for words right now. It seems very satirical, yet also serious at the same time, which I like, because it ...

    Dec 25, 2015
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Dramatic Re: Homemade wings.

    Wow! I really like this poem! The main character was well developed and interesting, it seemed like a person I might become friends with, very relatable. Furthermore, the whole situation ...

    Dec 25, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: homecoming

    This was beautiful! I loved the imagery in this poem, it's one of the things I really look for in poems. It created this wonderful, deep image that was also ...

    Dec 23, 2015


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