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I love it! The personification of the love as a battered, bruised person in the beginning is excellent. The metaphors and imagery and word choice and other literary devices are ...

Wow! I absolutely love this poem. Firstly, the metaphor comparing painting on a canvas to love was great. I also really like the first stanza with the detailed descriptions. The ...

Amazing poem! I love the rhyme and rhythm and I didn't see any problems with grammar and spelling and structure, so excellent job with that! In the sixth line, at ...

Great poem! I have no pointers on grammar or spelling, so good job with that ;) As a poet who loves to rhyme, I totally get the struggle of finding ...

Hey! Nice piece. I relate so much to the line "... my harshest critique who turns out to be me"! I love the word choice and imagery and the way ...

Hi! This is one of my first reviews so pardon me if it's not the best ;) I love this! Very intriguing. However, I do have many points to make ...

Great poem! It must be very personalized and talk about your experiences or something because I'm having a hard time understanding the message. I loved the lines about "a poor ...