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Re: Time
I sat there watching the clock wishing that the time would never come I didn't mind staying after school or anything like that but I didn't want to face what ...
Mon Jan 05, 2009 5:10 pm -
Re: Just A Lie
Helloooo, I'm Helen here's my review 8) Two months ago, you held my hand. You said you loved me more than all the sea and land. This is a nice ...
Mon Jan 05, 2009 4:39 pm -
Re: Tipping The Velvet {ten}
I feel like a hypocrite reviewing your work as you're such a beautiful writer compared to me, so i'll just tell you what i think.. I love all of these ...
Fri Jan 02, 2009 6:09 pm -
Re: [deleted]
WOW :shock: :D i read 1 and 2 and i think they're both amazing and i really enjoyed reading them. It was weird reading my own name so many times ...
Sun Dec 28, 2008 12:36 pm -
Re: I Used To Fly
I Used To Fly The sky was my canvas The color so blue My wings were my brush My inspiration was you. I love this stanza, it's brilliant! the way ...
Sat Dec 20, 2008 10:22 pm -
Re: Perfection
I like the concept of this and the fact that it's your own feelings, did poetry help you through your hard times? Overall, this was really good, i liked how ...
Sat Dec 20, 2008 10:14 pm -
Re: Sorry dad
wow, i think this is the definition of short and sweet! i like a short poem, and i like the concept of this especially. poetry has no rules, so who ...
Sat Dec 20, 2008 10:07 pm -
Re: Ever Since
I see you're fairly new to YWS, welcome, if you have any questions or anything, feel free to PM me. I may not be a literary genious, but i am ...
Sat Dec 20, 2008 9:14 pm -
Re: Twilight - A Reality.
heeey twilight fanfics can get a bit tedious sometimes, cos they always seem to have happy endings and i'd like them to be a bit darker- i reckon i'm an ...
Wed Nov 26, 2008 6:03 pm -
Re: Guess?
hey i really enjoyed this! i am usually against gay pairings i must admit, but i'm becoming more open-minded as i get older! this story made me smile and at ...
Wed Nov 26, 2008 5:45 pm -
Re: I don't Understand You.
Hey, i really liked this, i only noticed a few mistakes so here they are! :) how could you let him get to me? when you was his husband, this ...
Tue Oct 21, 2008 3:02 pm -
Re: Falling
the typos have already been pointed out so it saves me the trouble! haha i really liked this, it was very gripping and i especially liked the way that you ...
Tue Oct 21, 2008 2:50 pm
